DUMP OF ECK'S UNFINSIEHD GARBAGE

[eck]

my name is dan, and this is my dump.
updates will be on the posts below.

[Fool]

I'd say palette is lovely - really like it, shapes still comming - stylewise not much to CRT for me.

[eck]

thanks for the comment!  always nice to hear from your insperations =P

when you say theres not much to crit stylewise, does that mean that

its my own style, so its fine?

or

dude it looks like crap, i dont know how to crit it cuz its so bad?

[Fool]

thanks for the comment!  always nice to hear from your insperations =P

when you say theres not much to crit stylewise, does that mean that

its my own style, so its fine?

or

dude it looks like crap, i dont know how to crit it cuz its so bad?

  I've meant there is no much to crit since overall shapes are not define yet and I can't tell where you're going with it, except a colors choice.=)
All I figured out it is going to be personally stylish  - can't wait for update to see more.=)

[Razz]

Haha, very nice. However, the AA seems to be a bit ... harsh? It seems that there's either too much or not enough contrast between the AA and the outlining colour in most places.

Also, on the insides of the ears, the purple highlights are on the wrong side.

[eck]

TOPIC; I RAISE YOU FROM THE DEAD!

with some new art too!

started to color some lines from the line art thread.  guess this thread shall serve me as a dump now?

[eck]

i thought this was a critique forum...

finished the bird thing for now, because i cant seem to get the fetheres right.


and something new.



lines by .takam

[Bugguy]

Butt showing dress 
Pretty nice, but needs improving

[eck]

thanks for the detailed critique 

[sami/pso]

You should finish the cow. It looks amazing.

[eck]

done with the lady.

tomarow if i get time, ill work on
a)finsihing the cow
b)someone elses lines.

[Turbo]

Good thing you're trying to finish stuff, it's what separates serious artists from doodlers, in my opinion.

However, i think the bird and lady still look unfinished. Mainly, the bird's jacket doesn't follow the shading style and depth of the head, and the feathers are just rushed
The lady's lower dress also looks unfinished (and you should go quickly check some references for the folds), you need to keep a consistant lightsource throughout (specially on the hair ), and the hair's AA makes the lines look broken and noisy. Ditch the black lines and the pillow shading around them. Also, try to keep your lines fluid, there's a lot of broken looking lines on your pieces (and the AA isn't helping much, practice that too - ONE THING AT A TIME IS EASIER. DO IT FOR INSTANT XP INCREASE).

ALSO HER BUT IS SHOWIN

[eck]

ALSO HER BUT IS SHOWIN

i know, isnt it awasome??

ok, thanks for the crit.  it has become quite apparent to me that aa has becoma an issue.  i actually have been told that by a runescape pixeler.. now thats embarassing... 

[eck]

because my aa sucks, i felt the need to improve it.



lines by blackeye.

[candiru]

I love the butt-showing dress. The shading on it is very good.

The lines could use some tweaking, they're too dark and at places too thick and jaggedy. Especially the lines on the hair, there's better ways to shade hair I'm sure.

[eck]

he had a dick once, but a prostitute bit it off.

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i baked ilkke a cake for his birthday.  my aa needs work.



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