AuthorTopic: A Calm girl in a dress  (Read 3142 times)

Offline susanands

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A Calm girl in a dress

on: April 15, 2007, 12:53:28 am


Umm, I think her hair looks a bit pillowed >:{ I used the same style of shading on the hair and the clothes, I don't really think that was a good idea.

Anything wrong with it? Just tell me! :D
« Last Edit: April 15, 2007, 01:15:52 am by susanands »

Offline PixelTheDoll

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Re: A Calm girl in a dress

Reply #1 on: April 15, 2007, 01:10:07 am
Im new to pixeling, so I dont know about what anyone else is going to say but I think it is just adorable!  ;D

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Re: A Calm girl in a dress

Reply #2 on: April 15, 2007, 01:48:34 am
I like the face, but you need to refine the lines. It just looks like you grabbed a pen tool and went nuts. The shading could do with some more contrast too.

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Re: A Calm girl in a dress

Reply #3 on: April 15, 2007, 02:06:26 am
I agree, the lines need refinement, and it doesn't have enough contrast.  It's cute though, I'd love to see this really cleaned up.  The eyes have a clear light source, but the rest of it doesn't.  Keep it in mind as you add highlight and shadow, it'll help a lot.  If the yellow is supposed to be gold, you may want to try darkening it with browns and oranges, and putting in much more contrast.

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Re: A Calm girl in a dress

Reply #4 on: April 15, 2007, 04:04:27 am
quick  edit:

upped the contrast a bit, got rid of a few colors as well.
not the best edit, but it can help.

btw, welcome to the forums..

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Re: A Calm girl in a dress

Reply #5 on: April 15, 2007, 09:39:39 am
You should make very clear that this is a doll base by Shouri. I know her signature is still next to the doll, but most people here have no idea who Shouri is and assume everything was made by you from scratch.

Shouri's site: http://www.shouri.com.ar/dollz/

This particular base can be found under Bases -> Sit

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Re: A Calm girl in a dress

Reply #6 on: April 15, 2007, 01:09:10 pm
And this particular post will be locked. Come back when you're read, understood and agreed to the terms of use of this forum. Further misleading or stealing of art will lead to your yearlong ban.