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Offline Zee

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Introspective Arsonist

on: April 17, 2007, 08:14:23 pm

C&C Please

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Re: Introspective Arsonist

Reply #1 on: April 17, 2007, 08:59:13 pm
I only see a red x :(

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Re: Introspective Arsonist

Reply #2 on: April 18, 2007, 12:52:15 am
I can see it just fine on my home computer.

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Re: Introspective Arsonist

Reply #3 on: April 21, 2007, 05:52:46 pm
besides the anatomy problems, I think your lightsource needs much more definition, the right (our right) leg just looks like the light is coming from all directions instead of one. also why are there blue dots in the hair?

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Re: Introspective Arsonist

Reply #4 on: April 21, 2007, 06:17:03 pm
I see the main problem as shading.

Try sitting like that yourself.. Having your arm infront of your leg like that and trying to play guitar should be pretty awkward. He should lean more forward and his hand should be placed even further to the right (his right hand&arm should be moved closer to his left...) if it's supposed to be a decent comfy form.
« Last Edit: April 22, 2007, 10:22:27 am by Elrinth »
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