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[WIP]The Front Door

on: April 14, 2007, 05:08:51 pm


This picture is like my first but, it is the view of the front door of the house.I realy need help on this one.It looks to plain and I don't know what to do with it.So please take a few seconds to write something down.Thanks.
« Last Edit: April 15, 2007, 06:06:41 pm by ~KING~ »

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Re: The Front Door

Reply #1 on: April 14, 2007, 08:12:06 pm
Doorknobs are usually much lower than that.  My only suggestion is too look at a bunch of doors.  Maybe go to a hardware store (or a hardware store website) and look through the different doors, then take what you like.

I like the suitcase, though the black shadow on the top looks out of place.

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Re: The Front Door

Reply #2 on: April 14, 2007, 08:55:31 pm
 :o It's not a suitcase. :P

But ya,I looked a doors but the one I coppied didn't have a door knob.

The two objects are a tool box and a shovel if any one wants to know.

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Re: The Front Door

Reply #3 on: April 15, 2007, 01:34:20 am
Oops.   :-[  Maybe some extra shine would help that.  Instead of a T for the shovel handle, an enclosed D shape will be more recognizable.

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Re: The Front Door

Reply #4 on: April 15, 2007, 06:05:11 pm

Added lights the backround looks plain to me.Added poles on both sides not to shure what to do with the tool box. ???
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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #5 on: April 15, 2007, 11:16:37 pm
The scale seems wrong.  The shovel should be bigger, and that toolbox is huge.  As for the shading on the tool box, I made a very sad attempt.  Dithering is not my forte.

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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #6 on: April 16, 2007, 04:17:34 pm
Thanks for all the help.I'll be shure to fix that up. :P

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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #7 on: April 17, 2007, 05:11:44 pm

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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #8 on: April 17, 2007, 08:17:39 pm
I think that looks really neat man. Nice way to milk the 1-bit color scheme.

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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #9 on: April 17, 2007, 08:31:18 pm
I think if you decide to only use 1bit styledither or at least different dithering techniques play a very important role. Since this piece isn't very small I dont see any reason why you shouldn't make experiments with that. only using standard 25, 50 and 75% percent dithering doesnt really make this an intresting picture and also doesn't help the readabilty of different materialls in your picture

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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #10 on: April 19, 2007, 12:07:05 am
This might seem stupid but I only know two ways to dither and their shown in the picture.



You Da'Bomb,
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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #11 on: April 20, 2007, 10:16:48 pm
.. Then draw something else?

You haven't even said what you want to put *in* the room.. "Objects" is pretty vague.

Also the perspective itself is messed up. It'd be hard drawing anything in correct perspective in that room regardless of how good you were.

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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #12 on: April 21, 2007, 08:40:50 am

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Re: [WIP]The Front Door

Reply #13 on: April 21, 2007, 07:11:39 pm
Nice Realy Nice Thanks.