[WIP]The Front Door

[~KING~]

This picture is like my first but, it is the view of the front door of the house.I realy need help on this one.It looks to plain and I don't know what to do with it.So please take a few seconds to write something down.Thanks.

[Sharm]

Doorknobs are usually much lower than that.  My only suggestion is too look at a bunch of doors.  Maybe go to a hardware store (or a hardware store website) and look through the different doors, then take what you like.

I like the suitcase, though the black shadow on the top looks out of place.

[~KING~]

  It's not a suitcase.

But ya,I looked a doors but the one I coppied didn't have a door knob.

The two objects are a tool box and a shovel if any one wants to know.

[Sharm]

Oops.     Maybe some extra shine would help that.  Instead of a T for the shovel handle, an enclosed D shape will be more recognizable.

[~KING~]

Added lights the backround looks plain to me.Added poles on both sides not to shure what to do with the tool box.

[Sharm]

The scale seems wrong.  The shovel should be bigger, and that toolbox is huge.  As for the shading on the tool box, I made a very sad attempt.  Dithering is not my forte.

[~KING~]

Thanks for all the help.I'll be shure to fix that up.

[~KING~]

[Zee]

I think that looks really neat man. Nice way to milk the 1-bit color scheme.

[philipptr]

I think if you decide to only use 1bit styledither or at least different dithering techniques play a very important role. Since this piece isn't very small I dont see any reason why you shouldn't make experiments with that. only using standard 25, 50 and 75% percent dithering doesnt really make this an intresting picture and also doesn't help the readabilty of different materialls in your picture

[~KING~]

This might seem stupid but I only know two ways to dither and their shown in the picture.



You Da'Bomb,
~KING~

[Mixel]

.. Then draw something else?

You haven't even said what you want to put *in* the room.. "Objects" is pretty vague.

Also the perspective itself is messed up. It'd be hard drawing anything in correct perspective in that room regardless of how good you were.

[philipptr]

(not mine)

[~KING~]

Nice Realy Nice Thanks.