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Re: [WIP] A young lad. update3.

Reply #20 on: June 01, 2007, 03:07:25 am
Hmm, I dunno if you meant for him to have a long shirt, but right now his torso looks really long compared to the legs. If the shirt is just long, maybe hide more of the pants under the shirt?

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Re: [WIP] A young lad. update3.

Reply #21 on: June 01, 2007, 07:15:20 am
Hello, glad to see you're still working on this.

I don't mind the arms/legs lengths personally, somehow this has its harmony. What I do mind is that the way the hands themselves are done shows confusion in how hands are generaly drawn and hesitation in applying a realistic model to them. They're just stubs with short stubby random fingers on them, which doesn't work, obviously. Check some reference when in doubt as usual!

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Re: [WIP] A young lad. update3.

Reply #22 on: June 01, 2007, 07:31:01 pm



welp, I tried fixing them, heh I kind of forgot about the hands and just colored them the way they were.

I probably didn't even fix them well really, hands like this isn't my strong spoooooot.

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Re: [WIP] A young lad. update3.

Reply #23 on: June 01, 2007, 08:59:56 pm
im not sure if its just me or does it look like he has no waist. looks like it goes his gut to his legs ???

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Re: [WIP] A young lad. update3.

Reply #24 on: June 02, 2007, 02:13:35 am
The right hand is okay, I think the left is smallish and needs work and definition still.