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Pixel's that need cc

on: April 08, 2007, 12:47:17 pm
Hey everyone.

Chubby preditor.

-not happy with the spear, any cc on that would be appreciated

Zombie Bunny.

-unsure of how to do legs
-unsure if readable
-trouble with making heart look like its hanging out of the hole in the bunny's chest
UPDATE:

-thanks fool for helpful edit.

All CC is very much appreciated  ;D
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« Last Edit: April 17, 2007, 10:10:58 am by and2 »

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Re: chubby predator

Reply #1 on: April 08, 2007, 01:11:02 pm
I like the idea, but I think you went overboard with the style dither, and the face, is kinda boring, I would have ade it more trollish, but I assume that is not what you were going for, because you did not put it in, in which case I shall shut up..
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Re: chubby predator

Reply #2 on: April 08, 2007, 07:28:20 pm
I made a very rough, quick, sketch of hands for you, and pointed something out to me; his back arm is down lower than his front arm, even though its supposed to be in the backgrounda bit, you should move it up a few pixels.

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Re: chubby predator

Reply #3 on: April 09, 2007, 01:32:36 am
Thanks for the cc and edits.
Update:


Eh?
« Last Edit: April 09, 2007, 01:36:05 am by and2 »

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Re: chubby predator

Reply #4 on: April 09, 2007, 01:36:34 am
well, I like the spear head, but the hand is drawn in a way that makes it look like the guardian thing isen't holding the spear, so much as floating it behind his hand... I would suggest to fix this making the spear shaft thicker.
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Re: chubby predator

Reply #5 on: April 09, 2007, 01:37:42 am
ohh i see. yes, thank you.
I will try fix a bit later on.

Thanks for the fast reply also.

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Re: chubby predator

Reply #6 on: April 09, 2007, 01:40:44 am
ohh i see. yes, thank you.
I will try fix a bit later on.

Thanks for the fast reply also.

yep, no problem, I have othing better to do tonight, and I am incredibly bored, so I stalking the boards for new posts :crazy:
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Re: Pixel's that need cc

Reply #7 on: April 16, 2007, 12:58:11 am
started a bunny? a Dead bunny.
Going for something small with detail

Zombie Bunny.

-unsure of how to do legs
-unsure if readable
-trouble with making heart look like its hanging out of the hole in the bunny's chest
« Last Edit: April 16, 2007, 01:00:16 am by and2 »

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Re: Pixel's that need cc

Reply #8 on: April 16, 2007, 01:17:06 am
It definitely looks like a zombie bunny to me, I love it..

The eyes look very pinky rather than reddish here, but it could be the colours surrounding it offsetting them.. they look kind of swollen pustule-ish.. (is that bad for a zombie bunny eyes? possibly not)

I'm not sure i understand the angle at the bottom of it's body? Would the legs be like little teddy-bear type things? It looks a bit plushy-like now and that could be cute.

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Re: Pixel's that need cc

Reply #9 on: April 16, 2007, 01:26:23 am
yeh, thats the kinda idea. small, cute, DEAD! lol.
i am going for a not so realistic look, yet not 100% cartoon-like, kinda like a doll. Perhaps the bunny version of chucky?  ;)