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Offline HMC

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But really, I'm not actually your friend

on: April 08, 2007, 12:25:23 am
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Made this for the PixelJoint weekly contest. 9 colors. Comments and criticisms would be swell, but since the contest ends tomorrow night I would prefer them to be sometime in the next 30 hours.

Subject is John Linnell, BTW.
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Re: But really, I'm not actually your friend

Reply #1 on: April 08, 2007, 12:52:31 am
the lighting is very nice   :y:

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Re: But really, I'm not actually your friend

Reply #2 on: April 08, 2007, 12:56:01 am
Well I only see a few things that could possibly help you. The first would be that his eyes are very large looking. I think this may be just a style, but if you are going for a realistic look then this is bad. I actually like them kind of large though. Secondly, the bottom lip looks somewhat flat. Maybe adding a highlight on it will give it a bit more depth. And the last thing I wanted to mention is it's hard to tell if he has any eyebrows or not. Hopefully these will help you. Goodluck and keep it up, it's looking real nice  :).

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Re: But really, I'm not actually your friend

Reply #3 on: April 08, 2007, 07:12:39 am
Nice light indeed. This guy looks menacing. Anyway, crits: I can't read what that round thing on his head is, hair, a stetoscope or what? The ear seems quite flat and tiny.

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Re: But really, I'm not actually your friend

Reply #4 on: April 08, 2007, 09:02:54 am
reminds me of the picture cutscenes they had on the Toy Story Sega Genesis game
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