[WIP] Animation dog. Sweet and funny.

[Doppleganger]

I really like this puppy! He looks so full of life and character. I think that the shading on him is kind of dodgy in some areas. Mostly, the new northeast poses. With the black outlines and the very faint shading on the head, it looks like it's an uncolored line art. Perhaps some more contrast or darker colors on the head would help that.

[mangust]

Thanks Doppleganger. I try it, well - it's better 


Also jumps and run back:

[mangust]

Bark

Let's play ))

Growl

Fawn

[Sharm]

Growl looks like he's sniffing something.  Not sure what you need to do to make him look like he's growling.  Perhaps change his pose into a crouch, make it more obvious that his ears are turned back, and take away the subpixeling on the nose.

[dragonrc]

looks fine to me, but maybe you can lower the head 1 pix and put the ears a bit back to make it look better.

[Fool]

Nice work so far=)
I'd suggest more threat in expression for the growl - it is a little unclear - maybe someting like that.

[mangust]

Yes, growl is not some correct )) Just I donn't know what I doing not right. Now I am know this, thanks for your's comments, Sharm, dragonrc and for Fool at the illustration )))
I think this better:

[mangust]

More move.
Eat:

Negation:

Play - back view:

Whimper:

Lie on back:

Fawn - back view:

Growl - back view:

[eck]

critique'n time!

eat- looks fine to me
negation-  not sure what this is, but looks like a head bop.
play-   fine
whimper-head needs to be lowered
lie on back-looks fine, prehaps animate him roling from side to side on his back?
fawn-looks like idle. again, though, not really sure what this is.
growl- looks like its on a different angle then the rest of the backwards things.  his head is tilted to far twards us.

theres my critique

[mangust]

Thank you, eck!
negation - it's just say "No"
whimper - i think you right, i try it.
And with growl - yes it's my trouble  .