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Sweater Kaneda

on: March 26, 2007, 02:21:28 pm
Because pill-jackets are overrated...

..well, the pants are obviously unfinished, and i'm having trouble.  i've never been the best with pants, so i was hoping to
get some helpful feedback on this one.
by all means, please give me some critique on this one.

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #1 on: March 26, 2007, 06:08:14 pm
Bloomin' awesome sweater. Looks great. I love hoe you've coloured it.

The pants, overall seem in good shape.I think defining the knee with fold would look good, keeping them rather darker.

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #2 on: March 26, 2007, 11:16:00 pm

i changed the bottom of the sweater a little bit, and i began working on the pants...

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #3 on: March 26, 2007, 11:35:23 pm
like the texture on the wooly sweater. The collar doesn't read as well as the rest of the image though, I think it needs more separation from the first white stripe.

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #4 on: March 27, 2007, 01:14:50 am
like the texture on the wooly sweater. The collar doesn't read as well as the rest of the image though, I think it needs more separation from the first white stripe.

 :y: ?
also, i'm starting to think that after this one, i want to do one of Tetsuo, but i'm getting ahead of myself. ;)
edit: i did some work on the pants. tell me what you think.
« Last Edit: March 27, 2007, 03:49:05 am by infinity+1 »

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #5 on: March 27, 2007, 06:06:27 am
AKKIIIRAAA.

anyway.
his hands seem a little too close to his crotch. and the combination of that look on his face and the hands-on-crotch is interesting.
nice werk though.
thanks Dogmeat!

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #6 on: March 27, 2007, 08:27:04 am
your last edit on the pants is very good IMO..
(I would sellout the sweater but that maybe personal taste...)
hurry up finish those shoes!  ;)

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #7 on: March 27, 2007, 05:01:37 pm

i think i'm almost done with the pants. and i attempted to color the shoes, but i don't know if they are working for me...
also, i tried pulling the arm back a little bit... ;)
eh, bash me with constructive criticism

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #8 on: March 27, 2007, 05:22:13 pm
First thing I noticed is the collar, it should have more volume - a sweater isn't paper thin. I'd move it up a pixel or two.

The little white highlight pixels on the red parts of the sweater look wrong to me. At least the ones on the arm don't work for me.

There's a red stripe that looks like it gets cut off near the elbow.

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Re: Sweater Kaneda

Reply #9 on: March 28, 2007, 04:30:18 am

First thing I noticed is the collar, it should have more volume - a sweater isn't paper thin. I'd move it up a pixel or two.
i'm not sure if you know this, but Kaneda wears a shirt underneath the sweater, and i was hoping that it would look like the collar is coming out from behind the sweater. either way, i did a small edit on the collar to try and seperate it a little bit more and bring it up a bit, as you suggested. and you were right about the red stripe, i totally missed it when doing one of my edits.
also, newer version of the pants, and i think i'm done with them, unless someone just absolutley hates them..
so...is this thing nearing 100% or what?