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Android F

on: March 25, 2007, 09:45:19 am
Current:


mmk.
so sure.
I guess ill post a thread that pertains to the progress of my next pixel.

original
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v300/flaber/extra%20stuffs/antl7-2.png
first update:
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v300/flaber/extra%20stuffs/antl8-2.png

as of right now - im just blocking out the shapes and shadows.
Im fairly certain that im going to replace the face colours - as of right now all they are planned as, are temporary colours i can use to start shading with.

I havent really textured anything, (well the little iv done). I havent blended or dithered.
The stage im in right now is just blocking out my colours.

my biggest concern at the moment - is of the actual face.
dont worry about the rest of the uncoloured lines, ill clean those as i reach them.
(please dont comment on lack of hands - those will be added once i reach there).

eventually she will be leaning against something, and perhaps ill add a background.
just a somewhat idea, of why there are random lines at her side and shins.
« Last Edit: April 25, 2007, 03:05:13 am by flaber »

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Re: Android F

Reply #1 on: March 25, 2007, 12:17:45 pm
The face size is okay.. perhaps a bit larger than it should be. But the skull you've put it on is tiny.

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Re: Android F

Reply #2 on: March 25, 2007, 12:42:07 pm
@Helm: I think maybe the whole head is just a face 'plate' with no actual body to the back of it, except for the tad of circutry at the top there. Let's wait and hear.

@Flaber: The lips stick out to me the most, they seem to large and slightly crooked. I think thinning them out and giving the mouth a more relaxed look would help the facial expression. The chin could be pulled farther in, and sharpened a little, and the eyes... i'm not sure how one would go about making them look more feminine. I think you're missing a small highlight right above the eye that the eyelid makes. Not too too sure.

The lines are looking great though, want to see more!

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Re: Android F

Reply #3 on: March 29, 2007, 08:05:54 am


i got some spare time, so heres an update of my current state.
still fleshing out ideas, like the green.
does the green work for techno gadetry, or should i add some more in there, make it more interesting?

the greys are getting lost so im going to have to change those up eventually.

about the head/face.
i spent awhile, revamping it. still needs some more work, but its getting there.
i thinned the face (so its less wide) is the skull too small, or is it better now? I could add more onto the back, just wasnt sure if i needed to or not.

its coming.. slowly

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Re: Android F

Reply #4 on: March 29, 2007, 08:27:08 am
Basically she has no back to her head. Just a face, and what would be the front half of the skull.

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Re: Android F

Reply #5 on: March 29, 2007, 11:18:16 pm
alright
ill try and extend her skull for my next update
thanks

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Re: Android F

Reply #6 on: April 25, 2007, 03:07:49 am
mmk
so - its been quite awhile.

been busy with school, and personal life and such.
but thats fine - because i have no deadline.

heres an update:


slowly getting there.
not sure if the skull is corrected yet.. i made a small change to it - because i wasnt sure how much larger to make it.

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Re: Android F

Reply #7 on: April 25, 2007, 04:03:07 am

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Re: Android F

Reply #8 on: April 26, 2007, 10:13:40 pm
OHHHH
heh,
i definatly did not think it was that much.
But working on the edit now - i can definatly see the difference.
Guess it was just one of those things, looked at it for too long that icouldnt see it any more.
thanks.

ill try to get another update sometime shortly

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Re: Android F

Reply #9 on: April 28, 2007, 10:51:47 am
My suggestion is to start drawing in the hands right now, and not wait until you've detailed the arms. The reason is that I don't think the current forearms will work with any hand pose.

Here's a suggestion on the most prominent hand, excuse the non-pixelness: