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Juzou's Pond

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imonk:
Juzou the drunkard... (Sekiro)

pistachio:
I don't know how much you've stuck to ref but it looks like you're pushing yourself with the perspective of these poses now. Always cool to see that kind of progress.

Look at putting more variation in your ramps (look up hue-shifting), and either break up the outlines or AA them

The feet and hands kind of look like boxes, try sketching out more positions for the fingers and looking up anatomical reference

I don't know how you're gonna finish/AA the staircase :huh: Try breaking down the wood grain.

All I've got for now, keep on.

imonk:
Thanks, hey do you suggest I just keep going with new drawings then come back to these, or finish up before moving on? I like to just take feedback and keep moving forward. But it would be nice to come back and master the drawings. Honestly this one, I was considering animating.

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