i like the style, but there are a couple of things.
Firstly, they are all looking up, i would suggest moving the eyes down so that they are looking to the squares before them instead of the sky.
second - the lines you've used across the torso don't quite read, i woul suggest altering that a bit.
third - the shoulders are too low for the common person, he is breaking his own collar just tsnading that way
fourth - Mr. Bones and the unclothed base lack any sense of thickness around the hips
lastly - might be intentional, but Mr. Bones has no neck
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