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Robot girl

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Applefatdotgov:


I made some changes, but I didn't go nearly as far as you did. I DID manage to cut two shades off in the process atleast, and it looks better for it.
There's some oddities to her that I've noticed from all the art of her Pochincoff has drawn of Orca, namely her body is actually a gel covering mechanical parts. she's not really shown as having that much anymore, but i get the feeling that's for ease of drawing her more than anything. You don't get that metal sheen effect with translucient surfaces, especially anything thicker than a glass pane. You instead get something more like this: https://i.imgur.com/YDrbzxS.png (nsfw)
As such I went for a much sharper rim-light effect with one of the darker tones as the bleed, rather than to just plaster a lighter shade across huge swathes of it without reason. (I already was doing rim-lighting but apparently it was too subtle.)

daramon:
The changes are subtle, but I can see you've got some more consistent gradients in there now. Good work.

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