pretty good! I dunno if there's a more PC way to put this but it looks liek the bottom half of the girl's crotch is missing? It just sort of...stops. Her knees look over-defined too, and I'd monkey with her arm length a tad, she has very long forearms; likewise her thighs are a little on the short side. The selout is a little distracting here, as it works well in some of the flesh areas but is distinctly absent in others, like her clothing; that's not really working for me. You've got a smidge of pillow-shading on her forehead as well that is at odds with some of the more defined light sources on the rest of her body. The fish are pretty cute, but I'd use a wider range of color when you're shading them - right now the green fish uses green, green, green, green, and green; leetle feeshes are a perfect place to experiment with more diverse color ramps, since there are so many potential reflected and ambient light sources in the ocean!