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Offline Ricco, the Pirate

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Dragoness WIP

on: March 10, 2007, 05:40:47 pm
  Was with this in my head for a while, so I decided to try and pixelize my idea.
 
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14 colors, including Background

C/C!!
« Last Edit: March 11, 2007, 06:10:31 am by Ricco, the Pirate »

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Re: Dragoness WIP

Reply #1 on: March 10, 2007, 07:16:32 pm
Rawr :3. The right thigh and right calve stick out too much, and what is that white stuff flowing down to the ground, is it hair? Other than that, nice :y:.

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Re: Dragoness WIP

Reply #2 on: March 10, 2007, 07:59:26 pm
I'm not good in giving crits so I made an edit:



As major edits I changed the position of the left foot as it was looking awkward imo, I also lengthened the legs along with the middle of the body, but still the thighs are looking strange I dunno why?

« Last Edit: March 10, 2007, 08:01:00 pm by Gunne »
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Re: Dragoness WIP

Reply #3 on: March 10, 2007, 08:50:11 pm
Those boobies look extremely...
perky?
They're sticking out really far...at least the one on the left is.
I think the feet are at too wide an angle to one another. Standing with feet facing apart like that would give virtually no balance (ask me how I know). I think they should be roughly pointing in the same direction, with the widest angle being 90 degrees.
The hands and hair(?) should be different colors, as they blend alot right now.
Nice so far.

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Re: Dragoness WIP

Reply #4 on: March 11, 2007, 02:14:44 am

Updated, fixed some things, tnxs for the tips Wakka, Gunne and Xion, they've been really helpful. And yes, that "thing" flowing down to the floor is her hair, a morphing living hair sorta thing :P

I tried swiching the arm colors, but I just cant seem to get them right, any sugestions about that?
« Last Edit: March 11, 2007, 02:16:54 am by Ricco, the Pirate »