pixel Shrimp ;)

[djork]

Would you mind posting the reference photo you used (if you did).  If you didn't... outstanding job on the anatomy.

[ndrake]

Tried to antialias the eye a little and added highlights ( wrong positions I suppose )



Reference Photo:

Shot at 2007-07-16

[chigsam]

yes yes much better, looks a lot better then the first one. 

[lilwing]

it's really starting to come together! darken the legs.

[ndrake]

I'm rally having problems with creating an own palette with colors that match together.
SO I dont really like how the colors turned out this time.
Anyways heres an update:

Shot at 2007-07-16

[ndrake]

did an outline
and tried to dither a little.

[ndrake]

Shot at 2007-07-17

updated again

[Xion]

Woo, yeah!  some pixel progress!
Lookin' good so far, but I think the shades of red need more contrast (and maybe a little more on the white/tan parts, too). Its first two legs nearest to the viewer seem to be sprouting from the same spot, you see? Like, right where the joint of the second leg should be, it looks like it's fused together or something. Great progress!

[bengo]

Did a few tweaks here and there, added more contrast, added some selout, changed some of the colors and cleaned up the lines a little.

[ndrake]

Wooow thanks Xion and bengoshia for your reply! You really make me happy! Really nice edit. benogoisha. Especially the head area looks 1000 times better now.
I will see what I can make out of your critics. Because like I said its hard for me to make my own palette with matching colors. Dont know how to explain. I will make
a picture to explain a little later when I got time.
Thank you very much guys !!!!!!!!!!!