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cultured female

on: March 07, 2007, 02:19:29 am
got board, felt like pixeling, and just stole the idea off of pixelator.

one of my first sprites BTW, probably my third.  basically, i need help womanising the face and hair, because as of now, she looks a bit... err... broken-faced.


normally wouldn't post crap like this, but i would rather learn how to sprite correctly before i screw myself up even more. 

pallet stolen off of indigo, because I'm lazy :mean:.  thanks indigo :-*.
« Last Edit: March 07, 2007, 06:57:43 am by Panda »
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Re: cultured female

Reply #1 on: March 07, 2007, 02:30:52 am
You're missing a bracket on the closing img tag.  You might want to fix that.

Looks decent; sorry I don't really have time to comment right now.
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Re: cultured female

Reply #2 on: March 07, 2007, 02:33:00 am


you forgot the first bracket in the last img holder...

Her boobs seem kinda...huge.
Things look sorta weird, with her anatomy especially. I understand reality may not be the main focus, but this just looks too strange for me. Here hips are as narrow as a male's-possibly even narrower. Her feet seem strangely positioned also..I think it would look a wee bit better if it were to lean more towards the anatomy side of things. I'm enjoying the tribal/caveman type culture, and hope to see an edit!

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« Last Edit: March 07, 2007, 03:56:52 am by The B.O.B. »
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Re: cultured female

Reply #3 on: March 08, 2007, 12:22:34 am
Well, I did an edit...



I added more definition to the face, and messed with the anatomy and shading. I suppose it says it better than I can..
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Re: cultured female

Reply #4 on: March 08, 2007, 12:34:46 am
I think the face, especially the right (our right) cheekbone is too defined. Maybe try slimming down the face? The breasts look like they are too... high, I suppose that would be the right term. They don't look like gravity is affecting them at all.

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Re: cultured female

Reply #5 on: March 08, 2007, 12:44:00 am
I think the face, especially the right (our right) cheekbone is too defined.
It's the other way around.
The face isn't as defined as the rest of the body.

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Re: cultured female

Reply #6 on: March 08, 2007, 01:22:31 am
Yeah, remember, women have large muscular thighs (for birth giving). The breasts are a little awkward :-\.

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Re: cultured female

Reply #7 on: March 09, 2007, 08:00:41 pm
She seems to have very thick knees.  And, yeah, her bust is too perky.  Bringing them down may help with the face.

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Re: cultured female

Reply #8 on: March 09, 2007, 10:33:56 pm
I think the face, especially the right (our right) cheekbone is too defined.
It's the other way around.
The face isn't as defined as the rest of the body.
Actually, I probably should have said prominent.

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Re: cultured female

Reply #9 on: March 10, 2007, 02:27:36 am


edit to the head and tits. I meant to do more but I don't have the time atm.