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Critique: Demon Tree

on: March 09, 2007, 08:36:45 pm


Another guy created the frame on the left (so don't give me credit for being good, because I'm not  :'(). I created the other 3 frames on the right based on his original. The set of four are intended to represent the tree becoming weaker with increasing damage.


I feel that some parts of my frames look a little rough, particularly on the far right frame. I had intended to have the branches that the fire was burning on look like they were burnt black, but they just don't look very easy on the eyes to me. I don't know, can someone give me some comments/tips on how I can make my three frames better? Thanks

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Re: Critique: Demon Tree

Reply #1 on: March 09, 2007, 09:50:00 pm

little edit on the last frame, if you want to get a burnt effect you should darken the tips of the branches