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Offline Grynz

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[WIP] Horus, The God of Sky

on: February 26, 2007, 01:10:01 am



Early WIP. Need C+C on anatomy, and some ideas to make the piece more impressive.

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Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky

Reply #1 on: February 26, 2007, 04:57:49 am
Hey there, Grynz. Right now, just a glaring imperfection in this piece is the fact that he has 4 abs. I like it otherwise, but I'm not into the whole anatomy thing.
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Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky

Reply #2 on: February 26, 2007, 05:36:50 am
We need more to actually critique. However, please do fix the abs. And I like his hand/fingers. Very nice.  :y:

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Re: [WIP] Horus, The God of Sky

Reply #3 on: February 26, 2007, 06:32:58 am
Horus is normally illustrated as a man with a falcons head, so what I'd suggest you do first is change the lineart to reflect that.
Like this perhaps: http://www.hieroglyphen-info.de/bilder/goetter/horus.jpg

I'm more of a fan of the stargate designs of Horus though, http://screenshots.filesnetwork.com/69/files2/40436_1.jpg is a more developed one.