AuthorTopic: FINISHED! danger!  (Read 5725 times)

Offline Tremulant

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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #10 on: February 23, 2007, 06:30:28 pm
I figure after the generic "Add more ears!" comment, I owe you some actual critique :P

I think the face could stand to be a bit less generic, a bit more defined. I made an edit, as I'm wont to do (hope you don't mind):



It pretty much speaks for itself. deeper shadows, more definition, a bit more character, maybe... I dunno.

Something else I just picked up on: The right (our left) arm is a bit stiff, seems to be lacking definition (bicep, elbow, wrist the whole upper arm/forearm/ hand separation is almost unnoticeable). The original black blobs were a bit more... dynamic, for lack of a better word; more anatomically correct, I guess.

Otherwise, this is coming along really nicely. ;D

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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #11 on: February 25, 2007, 07:39:17 pm
another update check the 1st post...

i tried editing the face a bit, i reckon i can probably do some more definition to it... changed the arms... aaand added a hand after takeing one away, im not sure what to make him hold? origionaly he was going to be a gladiator holding a sword and a sheild... but i went off that idea for some reason... and now have a guy... with no point what so ever.... ideas? (hes holding a marshmellow on a stick for now  :D)
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Re: FINISHED! danger!

Reply #12 on: March 05, 2007, 06:29:19 pm
Finished!

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Re: FINISHED! danger!

Reply #13 on: March 05, 2007, 11:06:52 pm
The 'selout' on his arms is just horrible.

what is he holding?

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Re: FINISHED! danger!

Reply #14 on: March 05, 2007, 11:14:09 pm
He still looks stiff, IMO, with the position of his left arm.  The ripples on his stomach are too busy.  If the shirt is not tucked in, then the ripples in the shirt mostly should appear on the sides where the body curves. (In a downward direction.)

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Re: FINISHED! danger!

Reply #15 on: March 06, 2007, 07:23:52 pm
that thing he is holding is suposed to be a cloth that was covering the sign, i know he looks stiff, something i hope to rectify in my next peice... however i tried to work in the sign as he just uncoverd it... and now he is frozen stiff... hence the facial expression
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