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Offline artisan

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FINISHED! danger!

on: February 22, 2007, 01:48:22 pm

finished because i dont want to work on it anymores.... hopes u like


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putting the mobile game on hold while i try to get back into pixeling anyways heres where im at...




CnC?
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« Last Edit: March 05, 2007, 06:28:21 pm by artisan »
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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #1 on: February 22, 2007, 02:55:33 pm
My opinion - more principle in the form on body and face, than can paint details. Now it's too flat. My quick edit in right.
 
Good sketch  ;)

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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #2 on: February 22, 2007, 04:16:30 pm
Too many horizontal line across the torso for my tastes.  If it's because the shirt is tight, then keep in mind it would be pulled in several directions.  Atm the head is shading too much like a sphere, I think you should take into account the shape of the skull and facial features.

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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #3 on: February 22, 2007, 04:27:58 pm
made an update check 1st post...

think i got some of your crits in there cure but ill have another look at em l8er cos i just saw your post now..

any other CnC so far ?
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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #4 on: February 22, 2007, 06:08:14 pm


quick edit on the face. 

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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #5 on: February 23, 2007, 12:27:29 am
UPDATE.. check 1st post.... i dunno if i like old or new top best
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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #6 on: February 23, 2007, 02:21:37 pm
the new one is better but the head is really confusing me.  the top doesnt really have any light to it...except a couple lines.  nice job anyway though.

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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #7 on: February 23, 2007, 02:44:47 pm
He looks angry, is he gonna go fight the guy who cut off his ear?  :P

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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #8 on: February 23, 2007, 03:00:56 pm
He looks angry, is he gonna go fight the guy who cut off his ear?  :P

haha I knew something was bothering me, and now I don't know how I could have missed it. Give the poor man his ears!  :'(

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Re: some WIP some man

Reply #9 on: February 23, 2007, 05:26:16 pm
Update!!! check 1st post..

yeah i was wondering how long untill somone pointed out the missing ear, im wasnt sure if i was going to add a hat or hair at the start...

anyways added ear... i dont like it much, changed the head shine bit, added shoes n arms etc..

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