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Offline el zilcho

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Walker tank

on: April 06, 2007, 10:50:03 pm


this is my second piece of pixel art, i'd like to think i picked some things up like last time. ie. using a pallete, my last piece had over 200 colours  :hehe:

i'd like to know how to make it more readable. crit + edits welcome

cheers!

-EZ-

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Re: Walker tank

Reply #1 on: April 06, 2007, 11:22:56 pm
in fact, quick edit.



is this better than the first one or not?

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Re: Walker tank

Reply #2 on: April 06, 2007, 11:30:20 pm
Nice work. I think the problem with the readability is that you seem to have some perspective issues. to me it seems like the front part with the glass on top of it is in a different angle than the back part and also than the gun-arms. I might try to make an edit though I'm not sure if I will get it look right.

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Re: Walker tank

Reply #3 on: April 07, 2007, 10:37:50 am
Me like first one - intresting cabin  :) But yes, with perspective some problems, i hope this help you:

Or you may give gides from cabin, not from back box.
And if this tank (mighty, armored) why he has a glass cabin? It's one of the underbelly and that have grass... Of course it's you fantasy, but just think about this. ))