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Re: [WIP] Punk

Reply #30 on: March 08, 2007, 08:19:13 pm
You've got some work to do on the legs still, but this is a massive improvement, keep at it!

I must agree, I can't wait to see this thing finished o.0
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Re: [WIP] Punk

Reply #31 on: March 08, 2007, 08:22:49 pm
I agree with them ^^^ as well. Massive improvement. The only thing I'd say is that I'd like to see him still smile. Like, keep the eyes all angry but have him with a little smirk or something.
But I guess that's just the spirit of the Terror Raven coming back to speak through me. I...must...smile devilishly!

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Re: [WIP] Punk

Reply #32 on: March 09, 2007, 03:37:00 am
some little changes, still need help on his leg

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Re: [WIP] Punk

Reply #33 on: March 09, 2007, 03:54:26 am
I think the perspective on his left leg is off. You've made it much smaller as if it was behind him, yet his leg protrudes straight out, perpendicular to our view.

Also, I think hes leaning back a bit too much, looks like hes about to fall over. Having his arms out in front would help make him seem balanced.