[WIP] Punk

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how how

Im not good in pixel art (especially in color)

for sure i need help of all in this piece

first post here 

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How about some critics?

[Feron]

How about some critics?

How about something more than just a sketchy lineart?

[artisan]

< off subject >feron you are the worst i have ever seen for CnC and with being nice about it o.O.. you could have said the same thing more politely. also there IS stuff you can crit with just sketchy line art.. like the lineart if bits look wrong its allot better to get cnc now about it then when its all cleaned and colourd< / off subject >

ok back on subject.. some crits

1... looks like its going good so far, i would bring the Mohawk front a tiny bit forward or at least leaning forward
2...make the neck a bit thinker/shorter to hold that massive head.
3... his arm which is furthest back should be bought faward a bit more it looks like its attached to his back atm.

apart from that just clean it up i think.

[AdamAtomic]

This isn't a set-in-stone rule by any means, but generally, if you are inexperienced or have trouble with your colors, you may want to start with a smaller piece where you can experiment more efficiently.  Tackling a piece this enormous requires a lot of thought and planning!  I'd shrink him to about 1/4 the size he is, clean him up, and start practicing those colors!

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Okee Dokee, redimensioned and cleaned

[Serendor]

well

start colour it ^^

start by choosing which colour to use... like blue for the pants maybe

have different saturation on the colour to get the shading effect, also don't forget from which direction the light source are coming.

also it would be nice to see the pants a little bit worn out...

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thats y im talking, look at this crap colouring 

[artisan]

that back arm still needs to be moved faward a bit

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