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Offline jordan.neff

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Adventure game character -- crits please!

on: February 20, 2007, 04:58:51 am
hey guys, I have been lurking on this board for a while.  I am starting to design an adventure game and this is the first character I have designed.



I'm not much of an artist so i used a template i got at http://kafkaskoffee.com/tutorials/walkcycletut.shtml

my main concern is the outline of his face from the side.  I think the hair could also use a little work, but that's not as urgent IMO.

Offline tacky

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Re: Adventure game character -- crits please!

Reply #1 on: February 22, 2007, 12:56:40 am
the charactor needs more shading and the colors need to have more contrast


heres a little 2 minute edit

i hope you get the point.