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Offline madartiststan

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[WIP]Woodland Sprite

on: February 14, 2007, 02:16:59 am
Need some c+c not sure what I could fix but it feels like something's wrong or something I'm forgetting.  :'(

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Re: [WIP]Woodland Sprite

Reply #1 on: February 14, 2007, 02:19:33 am
I'm not exactly sure.. what to crit since its mainly just a green blob with a darker shade of lines on its chest.

Edit: Now that I took a closer look you might want to increase the contrast between the greens.

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Re: [WIP]Woodland Sprite

Reply #2 on: February 14, 2007, 04:46:34 am


Contrast added.  Don't set all your colors to maximum saturation.  Yes, it brings out the greenest of greens, but destroys the constrast.  Make use of your extra highlight too.

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Re: [WIP]Woodland Sprite

Reply #3 on: February 14, 2007, 03:31:48 pm
Edit:

I don't know if this helps much but you can take a look at it.
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Re: [WIP]Woodland Sprite

Reply #4 on: February 14, 2007, 05:12:46 pm
Yes these examples help very much so. Thanks. :]