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[Zach]

thank you for the comments guys

I really need help on these pants, they're a bugger :\

[Stwelin]

Darker creases, evening out the balance of highlights of each leg compared to one another, pockets. Just some examples of how i would steer it, take away what you will.

Also, I don't really understand why the right side of the body is more highlighted, but the left side of the pants has more of the pinkish highlight... Not really sure about it.

[Zach]

aye, I'll work on the darker creases

[ptoing]

The black outline hurts it.

[Terley]

yes I totally agree I think the black outline is too much, maybe using the 2nd darkest shade would be more appropriate and use the black for picking out darker spots..



looks awesome 

[Helm]

Zach is this for a game or something? If not, you could just go ahead and settle on a background color, and then pixel the 'sprite' normally on top of it (minimal aa and weighted outlines where needed) until it's no longer a sprite, but just a piece of pixel art. I really do agree the black outline could go, but selout - as Terley does above - isn't the only solution.

[Xion]

I don't like the way his < leg seems to just go straight down from his back/side. It's like the pants and belt have no depth and are plastered to his side. It also makes him look extremely topheavy.

[Zach]

this has to be looking somewhat better?

I've started to rid of the black outline and somewhat AA but still have traces of separation from the background