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Offline MoyArt

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Stripe (Gremlins) [WIP]

on: February 06, 2007, 10:37:51 pm
Hi, ima a huge Gremlins Fan and i think that there is not enough pixel gremlins on the web so i decided to start a gremlin revolution, starting with Stripe.

Ive just finished Stripe head, and i would love to hear your comments  ;D

Greetings!!!!!!

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Re: Stripe (Gremlins) [WIP]

Reply #1 on: February 07, 2007, 12:32:56 am
Well I tried to clean it up a bit. Quick n dirty patch up. (Note I only redid some of the left side)

(The ear I know your going for like an army camo effect) I would suggest bending it more etc.
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My main focus on the brow / eye area was trying to eliminate your thick dark lines, with the "sell out" technique (I think thats what its called). Also getting the eye to look more devilish  :mean: and defined.

With the hair i think less is more, just messed it up (hair styling) ;) and then left it with as little as possible shadow.

The ear I just shadowed more plainly.

The colors ( I am not good at those at all) I think are to close to each other in color meaning they look way too similar, try and vary them further apart. :) This you need someone else to help you with. I am trying to understand color myself.

I hope this helps maybe gives you some more ideas.

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SCiDT

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Re: Stripe (Gremlins) [WIP]

Reply #2 on: February 07, 2007, 01:25:43 am
Dude Thanks a lot!! it looks pretty neat, im gonna try to clean myself like the way you did, i really like the way his left eye looks right now.

Best regards

MoyArt

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Re: Stripe (Gremlins) [WIP]

Reply #3 on: February 07, 2007, 06:38:09 am
Its a pleasure, I am also still learning  :D

Anytime I can help I'll try, I  understand the frustration when you've worked a piece for hours and just cant get it the way you want it  :'(

Good luck!

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SCiDT

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Re: Stripe (Gremlins) [WIP]

Reply #4 on: February 07, 2007, 04:08:30 pm
im looking at this from my ds and under this resolution the neck looks like male genatalia, sorry to bring this up i know its a little juvenile but i think you should change it especialy now that i brought it up so everyone will see it :p
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Re: Stripe (Gremlins) [WIP]

Reply #5 on: February 09, 2007, 09:06:14 pm
im looking at this from my ds and under this resolution the neck looks like male genatalia, sorry to bring this up i know its a little juvenile but i think you should change it especialy now that i brought it up so everyone will see it :p

Done!!  ;D



Also i cleaned just a little bit, and made some changes, what do you think??

Thanks a lot for your help, now im making the body

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MoyArt

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Re: Stripe (Gremlins) [WIP]

Reply #6 on: February 10, 2007, 10:46:46 pm
Looking better.

I wish you luck with the body!

PS: Love the hair.  :D