Warning: "flipping off" in progress

[FaeryShivers]

Well, I was angry today so I decided to pixelate one of my "angry" pieces I drew a few weeks
ago. it helped somewhat. Making artists mad isn't a good idea, we can immortalize
our feelings into pictures buhahahha 

I really like the nippon ichi style so I did this sort of in that style.

 


Anyway C+C always appreciated.

(Edit: Last update October 3rd 6:58 pm est)

[AlexHW]

looks pretty good, I noticed that there are some double lines going on in places, for example the top of the arm/shoulder on the left side has two outlines next to each other. Perhaps meshing the lines together would help?(have some of the inner line cut into the outer line so that two values share the outside).

[FaeryShivers]

Hmm yes I see that, its from when I was fixing the shading I forgot to fix that x_x
Thank you I'll fix it as soon as possible.

[AlexHW]

hm..
take a look at this: http://pixel-zone.rpgdx.net/shtml/tut-selout.shtml
This is what I was suggesting and thought you were trying to do in your first version.

[FatalFetus]

Looks pretty kickass shivs, only comment I have is that his hand giving the godsend is.. somehow off. The shape looks more like a dinner biscuit than a hand, even compared to his other hand.. Other than that nice job, as usual. Leet muscle shades that I can't do yet 

Fatal

[FaeryShivers]

hm..
take a look at this: http://pixel-zone.rpgdx.net/shtml/tut-selout.shtml
This is what I was suggesting and thought you were trying to do in your first version.

Ohhh I see, I'm not very good at selective outlining yet. I'll read that thank you.



to fetus:

Yeah, my friend said his finger is messed up I'm going to try to fix  that too.

[Naso]

For some resone i don't think it looks like its flipping off maybe if u make the Knuckles shadow it will make it look more like a fist??