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[Sherman Gill]

Girl?

Yes. Perfect edit, in my opinion.

[Gnarf]

EDIT*

Wow, very awesome and helpful Helm, thanks.  I'll get to work on something similar.  I love how you kept the cel shade and no AA with this.[/edit]

hmmm, how's this?



@Xion - I sort of want the right hand to rest on the hip (as shown in contraposto) but i'm not sure how to depict it without screwing up the whole thing.  also not sure what you mean about the crowbar...

I see what you and Sherman mean about the breasts, but i wasn't planning to include any in the first place (she could be nearly flat chested, and breasts are hardly noticeable at a small size under a poncho; that's according to the google image searches)

@Feron, i'll try the edits on the original colors after i get somethings done with this one.

[SCiDT]

MSPaint is the only free program I have.  If you have any other suggestions, i'd be glad to hear them.

The Gimp http://www.gimp.org/

[Ryumaru]

heres an edit, it was done before helms was and probably isnt as usefull, but i thought id show anyway:
tried to show it was a female more with pose than with anatomy.

[Akira]

TBH i prefer this one.

We have lots of androgynous male game characters so whats wrong with an androgynous female? i don't think it particularly matters if the character is female or male or genderless unless its important to the game play. like if she uses her giant breasts to smother opponents then you may want to do a redesign
Ryumaru's edit is quite nice too.

[Xion]

also not sure what you mean about the crowbar...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Image:Piedbiche.jpg
See how it curves at the end?


Well, the problem with your update is that unless the cloth is stuck to her arm, it shouldn't follow the contours past her elbow.
Here I made an edit;

Pardon me for stealing a few things from helms edit.
Also pardons moi if'n I screw'd up.

[Gnarf]

Mine <---->  Helm's


@ryu - neat idea, but it sort of implies that she's in a tired state.  i used your idea on the crowbar hand, though.

@akira - yeah, but after seeing helm's edit, the original really seems too flat.

@xion - i see what you mean.  i edited the crowbar accordingly, and I gotta say, I love the highlight you used on the jacket.

thanks for everything guys.  if there're any more suggestions, please keep 'em coming.

Edit - just realized my character's stance is very careless looking, while Helm's is more heroic.  i may go back and edit the shoulders a bit.

[Souly]

You were probably going for something a lot less detailed.
And probably a lot less random, but I thought I'd post this edit anyways.


I more or less did this out of boredom.

But I haven't slept in the past two days so I'm pretty tired.

[Joseph]

sory souly but personally I think you ruined it.
I like helms the best so far but I believe another highlight needs to be added and bit more emphasis on the breasts as well/

I really like it so far otherwise, good luck.

[Souly]

sory souly but personally I think you ruined it.
I like helms the best so far but I believe another highlight needs to be added and bit more emphasis on the breasts as well/

I really like it so far otherwise, good luck.

That's what I thought.
I thought I might as well just post it since it could given him an idea.