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Offline HMC

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Daddy Issues (WIP)

on: February 05, 2007, 06:21:58 pm
If you saw last week's episode of House, then this may make sense to you.






(He is in a bucket of ice water outside, and that's a lollipop in his hands)

Any suggestions so far?
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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #1 on: February 05, 2007, 08:01:32 pm
Great likeness of House! The only thing I can see that may need fixing is that the neck seems to be facing straight forward, but the rest of him isn't.

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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #2 on: February 05, 2007, 08:15:09 pm
Thanks, and ah, yeah, the flaws in the lineart shall be fixed as I get to coloring them.

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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #3 on: February 05, 2007, 09:00:03 pm
This is good so far. The darker side of his head has seemingly anomalous highlights and light areas, which makes him look flat and embossed. Also, the highlights in his eyeballs don't seem to correspond with the lighting set up, I'd put the main highlight much further to our left, and also darken the rest of the white of the eye.

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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #4 on: February 05, 2007, 09:36:16 pm
Thanks for the suggestions. I've posted an updated version.

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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #5 on: February 05, 2007, 10:16:54 pm
A great likeness. needs more amonia fumes.

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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #6 on: February 06, 2007, 02:03:18 am
Updated the picture again. Getting close to finished. Any last suggestions would be great.

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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #7 on: February 06, 2007, 02:45:04 am

Just a quick little draw-over of the hand/lollipop. The hand's anatomy looked bad, I tried to fix it a bit. Also, the lollipop didn't look as good as it could (probably shouldn't be facing the camera, IMO). I would've also gone for a spiral shape for the lollipop (I tried to find a ref, only to stumble upon various lingerie pages), as the circles kind of look like a cop-out. I think it could be cool to give his arms a little baby fat. I also don't think durkadoo's neck crit has been addressed yet.

Other than the couple things mentioned, it looks great. Nice likeness. :y: I knew it was him before I read it.

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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #8 on: February 06, 2007, 03:20:39 am
Ahh, yeah. You make a good point about the hand and the lollipop. I'll work on that a little bit and touch up some of those other areas that need fixing.

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Re: Daddy Issues (WIP)

Reply #9 on: February 06, 2007, 05:34:46 pm
Posted new version. I think I'm pretty much done. If anyone sees anything that still needs to be improved or anywhere I just forgot to touch up, please inform me now.