Layout WIP (Updated)

[gliding]

Loads better Wayuki,

My only suggestion to better this already beautiful work is probably to change the dress/cloth thing. Right now I like the rendering but It just doesn't feel consistent with the rest of the image- it might be due,in part, to the dithering used on the rest of the image. Oh well, I love this piece.

[Feron]

i dont think the parting in her hair matches the direction of the head, that is if your intending it to be down the centre.

[Helm]

I feel the new one is much better in the parts you decided to edit. Congrats.

[vellan]

as mentioned above, the part of her hair throws off the angle of her head.

her right arm (our left) feels to long, specifically in the forearm.

the piece is coming along great, and the edits show solid progress. kudos.