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Offline Ben2theEdge

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #10 on: January 27, 2007, 05:31:33 pm
Adamatomic: That was driving me crazy, until you pointed it out, the lines were screwing up the perspective!, thanks for pointing that up.
About the char...well i didnt plan for it to look EVIL, but sort of badass or better said, "ready".

Im aware that theres a zoom feature, but i post it resized , because thats the intented resolution it should be viewed...though, i you make a fairly good point, so ill stop.

Heres something new...please continue the input on the images


I dunno, something looks kind of wrong on the animation, maby this fixes it:

(didn't edit the images, I only speeded up some frames)

I use the effect of repeating frames in a walking animation sometimes. It only works if the repeated frame is slightly modified though. He should be moving *slightly* between those two frames to give you the proper effect. Perhaps you are trying to make his movements "squirrely" by having those abrupt movements. It's a good idea generally but when squirrels run, they have actually have a very fluid rabbit-like hop. It seems you're going for an anthropomorphic animation though, in which case I'd advise emulating the human walk cycle a little more closely. Or go the other way and give him the rabbit hop if you want to get that "squirrellyness" across.


My edit.
« Last Edit: January 27, 2007, 05:49:23 pm by Ben2theEdge »
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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #11 on: January 27, 2007, 06:21:38 pm
Ben2edge: That is a very good edit....im studiying it right now, ill post some updates later, thanks man, completely get what you are saying

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #12 on: January 27, 2007, 09:44:35 pm

Those arrows, formed by the darker green.

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #13 on: January 27, 2007, 09:57:52 pm
For everyone's convenience. Edit wise that is  :P

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #14 on: January 27, 2007, 10:09:07 pm

Those arrows, formed by the darker green.

He said on the dirt...thats supossed to be grass; but yes, the pattern on the grass, is intentional....does it look bad]?

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #15 on: January 28, 2007, 01:02:34 am
aaah, typo - yea i meant grass not dirt! sorry for confusion.  the simple shaded grass style is nice - but the arrow patterns kinda confuse and distract things.  i think you should add a few rocks in there too.

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #16 on: January 28, 2007, 04:18:27 am
i though he meant these

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #17 on: January 28, 2007, 04:28:18 am
No, he already said it was a typo.
Plus, I don't see how that's an arrow anyway. It does look odd in any case now that you pointed it out. I think if it the road's edge-texture weren't so symmetric it wouldn't be as blatant.

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #18 on: January 28, 2007, 07:06:22 am
Hows this?

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Re: Something i made tonight, and hello to all

Reply #19 on: January 29, 2007, 09:40:53 pm
I think you should ditch the "arrows" in the grass. It looks too busy, and makes it hard to concentrate on the squirrel.