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[Feedback][WIP] Neon glow in Cyberpunk scene (Trigger warning: Drugs and Nudity)

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eishiya:
I think some smoke/steam would be a good idea, but right now it's so high-contrast and solid that it's drawing my eye away from those lower-contrast details like the dumpster, and to itself.

You'll have a hard time getting the viewer to focus on those details unless you make them pop visually themselves, just because the neon is so high-contrast. On the other hand, is that such a bad thing? Having some subtle details to find on one's own is fun too!

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