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Re: punk(hyene neck)

Reply #10 on: January 09, 2007, 08:06:39 pm
The old one actually looked alot better to me. Your new colors are too saturated, and strain my eyes to look at. 

You don't really need new crits though, because you haven't addressed your old ones yet.

The pillow shading is really going to hold this back no matter how many edits you do, so scrap the shading and start over with the suggestions B.O.B. made.