[WIP] The Legend of Zelda: I dunno yet... [EDIT1]

[Opacus]

Here's the start for the title sreen of a Zelda game I want to make with Game Maker...no comment on that....rather comment this:
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I'd like to know what you think. It's off course very W.I.P, but the first part of the sky is done, and the text is done.

[Skull]

Fantastic so far - The logo is looking great, very nice take on it.
The overall idea and portrait seem fine, perhaps make the forehead (or head size) a little larger.

[Opacus]

Fantastic so far - The logo is looking great, very nice take on it.
The overall idea and portrait seem fine, perhaps make the forehead (or head size) a little larger.

Thanks, glad you like it. I agree on the head, I always place the eyes far too high on portraits,
I never seem to learn....

When are these smilies gonna be turned back to normal by the way? Halloween is kind of....over...

[Luzeke]

The logo and the background looks awesome. 

There some things going on with links face though. The nose looks a little weird and he's got a massive underbite. His brows are furrowed, but the forehead doesn't follow.
Here's a quick and kinda sloppish edit. Hopefully it will show what I mean. Hope it helps.



What version of Link are you basing it on? Twilight Princess?

[Opacus]

The logo and the background looks awesome. 

There some things going on with links face though. The nose looks a little weird and he's got a massive underbite. His brows are furrowed, but the forehead doesn't follow.
Here's a quick and kinda sloppish edit. Hopefully it will show what I mean. Hope it helps.



What version of Link are you basing it on? Twilight Princess?

Thanks for the edit. I think I see what you mean, this solves it?

[ep]

I think you still need to cut back the bridge of the nose, forehead, and the bottom lip so that it has a bit sharper of a line (when i think of TLoZ characters I always think of crisp silhouettes), as well as thinning out the mouth (for now)

Looking good so far, really want to see the water tornado detailed.

[Opacus]

Here's the next update, and it should fix the face issues, I looked further into Luzeke's edit and came up with this:

Keep the c&c coming

[halu]

Everything so far is sexy
I LOVE your face shading, it's really awesome.
I'm assuming you're gonna get rid of the black lines, so I'll wait and see.

[sharprm]

Great writing and composition. Are his ears a bit smallish. i don't know. Cant wait to see how you do the tornado thing.

[Larwick]

Hmm, at the moment his face seems really weird to me. It's most probably because you're shading an anime-styled/shaped head with 'realistic' shading, rather than cel or whatever. I just don't think it works. Personally i like this shading style, so what i'd change is the shape of the face, give him a more realistic nose and an eye which looks less pasted on (eye also seems a bit high). The ear also seems too high and small atm.

I love the text and the idea so far. Good luck!