Pixel girl [WIP]- need C&C

[ZxC]

First time I try to make a pixel with low color count and I'm confused... Help me.
The linework is by me too.

[Joseph]

her breasts are really oddly shaped and then her right hand (our left) isnt looking very flat as though shes leaning on something.  her right left foot (our left) looks too wide.  then her head is a bit too small.  good luck with it.

[sharprm]

Getting a consistent light source would be a good start. Her leg and head suggest a light from the right, but her right arm and body
suggest a light from the left. I believe her eyes are too far up and close together.

[Ryona]

Nice drawing overall, but some little things that need to be fixed.
Her breasts for one are really oddly shaped. And her hand does look like it's placed firmly on the ground.
The face also needs work as well as her feet needing added detail.

I made an edit of your pic, ZxC, to show you what I feel needs to be improved.
Now there's still more things I would have liked to edit on, but I'm pressed for time, so I hope the other issues are taken care of as well.

[ZxC]

Thanks, and can I use your edit and rework the parts I haven't done yet?
 for the feet I haven't really started working on them yet, and I'll try to redo the hair too.

[sharprm]

The idea behind edits is for you to learn stuff, not for someone else to do the work for you. I suggest looking at whats Ryona has done
and reworking the piece in a similar fashion youself.

[Ryona]

Yes, sharprm is right, but I honestly don't mind if you want to use my edit and continue with it, ZxC. Go right ahead.

[DevilDRake]

Dont people usually have toes Because the foot looks like a flipper. Maybe you could fix that, make like a dip in the foot if u look at your own i'll know what i mean.