[Wip] help needed :S

[RhysD]

I think his lower torso should be further back so his chest area is overhanging it a bit..if you get what i'm saying.

quick edit to show what I meant (chest goes right, lower torso goes left)



edit: actually...I dont know right now...is he meant to be leaning back in the original? I think I got a bit confused as to what people were noticing was wrong about the chest.

[sharprm]

Here's an edit. Less Jellyness in my opinion. I tried cramming as much as I could from Baccaman's sites into my small mind before
drawing it. Don't just base your lines off my edit, try doing the whole process yourself. Draw the skeleton, wack muscles on it, etc.

[Senad]

yup thats awesome sharprm , u got tablet? I want one 

[Chaos Tayoko]

sharprm basicaly fixed wat i was about to say, the guy had no rib cage, and he looks like a block of jello. Keep it up AND 2