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Offline Adrian

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Gun

on: January 04, 2007, 08:20:21 am


C&C Please. Edits welcome, the color is kind of weird but the shape is ok I think..
« Last Edit: January 06, 2007, 09:40:29 am by Adrian »

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Re: Gun

Reply #1 on: January 04, 2007, 08:31:01 am
on my monitor I see a black squar but in closer observation I think I see something  :-\ .. I cant judge it.
I've not got anything interesting to type here..

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Re: Gun

Reply #2 on: January 04, 2007, 09:31:28 am
Oh my god, please make that background invisible.
Also. not nearly enough contrast, plus it's majorly pillowshaded.
Oh yes naked women are beautiful
But I like shrimps more haha ;)

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Re: Gun

Reply #3 on: January 05, 2007, 12:21:07 pm
That is way to dark, maybe brighten the background please???

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Re: Gun

Reply #4 on: January 06, 2007, 09:40:53 am
How's that?

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Re: Gun

Reply #5 on: January 06, 2007, 01:23:23 pm
Very basic, and yeah, pillow shaded.. I'd add some mini details and introduce a highlight.

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Re: Gun

Reply #6 on: January 06, 2007, 02:57:45 pm
Yeah, definitely what Skull stated, a highlight would be nice, and some detail too.
Also, the trigger handle looks kinda odd, it would be wierd to hold IMO.
And, NO PILLOW SHADING, PILLOW SHADING IS BAD.