IDK man, you could have drafted this out and taken this further especially on a huge piece.
I'm not getting a visual direction and the dragon is just blocking out a huge chunk of whatever is behind it.
Few rough redraws so you see what I mean.
If this is going to be metal, big brother had a process thread for a metal(ish) HUD way back
here.
Wherever you want to take this overlay you can probably borrow things from his HUD design as well.
HTH.
