-= ROBO GOLEM =- BIG - 10 colors [WIP]

[Senad]

Hey again, here is my orginal character, ROBO GOLEM that I sketched and planned at my work when the customers were asleep lol..

And I kinda have hard to do the metal on his body, so I would appriciate if you could post suggestions for something, give criticism, edit it to show me / help me etc. I would be very very glad!!
 


 
Thank you, BJ !

[Ryumaru]

id love to give you an edit, but mouse drawing just isnt my specialty.
please do reinvestigate the deltoid and biceps, and the length fo the metallic arm. the abs also need some work.

[Akzidenz]

The anatomy is really bad, and he's really stiff, all around. Your anatomy on the other pieces was far far better, what happened?

[Senad]

:/ what u mean by anathomy?

I want him to have bigger upper body and smaller hand coz he dotn have half of the hand, he got this gún / laser instead..

[Indigo]

quick sketch.  Might be useful to you. I really need to get myself a tablet. 

[Senad]

wow whats cool, thanx

[DevilDRake]

hey bj its me kyle, nice work but yeah he is a bit stuff, the guy who did a quick scetch would make it better gl on it

[Helm]

As said, the anatomy is really lacking. Indigo's edit is good if you want marvel-comics-style-anatomy, towards which I don't suggest you move to at your current level.

[Indigo]

helms right.  At your level its probably best you don't distort your view of anatomy by stylistic proportions - though it did seem like you were heading in that direction anyway, thus my edit.  Study true life examples is my advice.