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critique on pixel pepper Fire?

on: November 16, 2018, 07:16:01 am
Its been a while,
I'd honestly love to have some critique on this fire, I'm overall pleased with this piece, but I would love to work on the fire for next time. 

Thanks so much.

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Re: critique on pixel pepper Fire?

Reply #1 on: November 16, 2018, 07:43:30 am
The pepper feels a little dull, I think you could push the hue-shifting more, e.g. by making the highlights warmer/orange-er.

Some of the sel-out looks a little weird to me, it just reads like a broken outline rather than a pepper. Since there's the flame background anyway, why not do external AA with it and leave the outline stay solid and consistent?

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Re: critique on pixel pepper Fire?

Reply #2 on: November 17, 2018, 01:28:15 am


Thank you for the pointers I see what you mean, I shifted the hue and made the highlights more orange-gy, and worked on the AA. 

Edit: Apologies, made a small edit to the highlights ^^;
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