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Offline Ragnarok

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Smuggler chases explosive baby!

on: January 01, 2007, 08:19:25 pm

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Souly's lines, my colour and background. Much thanks to him.
As always C+C much appreciated.
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Re: Smuggler chases explosive baby!

Reply #1 on: January 01, 2007, 08:27:12 pm
this should have been in the lineart exchange thread.
nevermind.

In any case, there isn't a lot to crit on...  The shades of grey on the 'explosive' guy are really close, maybe add a highlight?
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Re: Smuggler chases explosive baby!

Reply #2 on: January 01, 2007, 08:46:47 pm
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