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on: December 30, 2006, 05:38:56 pm
  that what i have so far.  basically, i need crits, and other helpfull comments.  this is my first post/topic here, so  HI EVERYBODY!
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Re: O.o

Reply #1 on: December 30, 2006, 06:10:58 pm

literally a 2 minute edit.

just work on the form and how the light hits the object.  i would also suggest reading some tutorials on AA.

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Re: O.o

Reply #2 on: December 30, 2006, 06:44:54 pm
:lol:  thanks a bunch for the edit.  actually, i really like that design and the silver trim on the cup. 
as for the aa, well, i know how to, i guess i just jumped a bit overboard  :P

edit:  yay or nay?

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Re: O.o

Reply #3 on: December 31, 2006, 12:39:58 am
The shadow looks like the light source is from the left but the shading on the cup looks like its on the right.
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Re: O.o

Reply #4 on: December 31, 2006, 12:46:11 am
Much better update.

I agree about the light that seems to be coming from a different angle on the cup, the shadow, and also the character! The character also looks a little bit pillow shaded, and I think the cup could do with some anti-aliasing. Also, maybe add some fun details like a sparkle on the cup and some kind of background. Or something.

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Re: O.o

Reply #5 on: December 31, 2006, 01:01:36 am
i was trying to make it look like the light was reflecting off the trophy onto the kid.  ill aa the trophy after i think of a decent idea for a bg. 
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