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Offline halu

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Now that I'm trying to progress more in pixel art...

on: December 28, 2006, 04:16:38 am

...I knew I needed to work on anatomy, above is about 10 minutes of work.
Mostly all from memory, I used Ryu's example for a bit of help with the ab structure.
I know it most likely sucks, because I'm crap when it comes to lineart, and I've never worked on anatomy, and two evils = DD:
So, critisize away.

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Re: Now that I'm trying to progress more in pixel art...

Reply #1 on: December 28, 2006, 05:34:56 am
Looking pretty sexy there. hehe

If critiques you want, critiques you shall have.

First off, the upper body looks so much bigger then the lower half. I think you should make everything from the waist down bigger.

Second, the neck looks too thick.

That's about it I guess.

Oh, and the curve of the thighs inward looks strange. His thighs have a weird banana shape to them.

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Re: Now that I'm trying to progress more in pixel art...

Reply #2 on: December 28, 2006, 05:00:48 pm
alright, thanks :D
I'll work on that when I get home, which should be later today.

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Re: Now that I'm trying to progress more in pixel art...

Reply #3 on: December 28, 2006, 11:36:52 pm
if you want to work on anatomy your best bet is to draw instead of pixel... you know, you sorta have to walk before you run. 

right now I think your trying to sprint x_x
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