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Offline Ryumaru

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Re: Qaz The Crazy

Reply #10 on: December 27, 2006, 10:41:00 pm
the shading is too stylized, it needs more substance, more depiction of forms.
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Re: Qaz The Crazy

Reply #11 on: December 28, 2006, 12:03:04 am
Here's two edits with my suggestions. First one is just darkening some stuff bringing out the volume and using your old face design. The second one is just some palette tweaking for fun.


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