Battle

[Suicidale]

Hey, kinda new here. I've browsed around and just looked at the place but never have posted until now.

Made this random battle scene of a guy attacking 2 others. Its just the basic body form and shading of the people. I have no idea how to make the detail for the guys, so tips would be helpful ^^.



c&c please

[Suicidale]

so uh, would any of the 200 views like to reply?

[Indigo]

please don't double post, Suicidale.  Sometimes things take longer than others to get replies.  The reason this hasn't is probably because of it's vast lack of completeness.  Its very hard to critique something like this other than saying "continue."

[halu]

Yeah, I'm with Indigo on this one, you can't really critique a piece this low in the WIP stages, it appears to have some potential though, so I'd like to see it finished

[Suicidale]

ok thanks lol. here is the line art for it. I'm trying to go for a more realistic look that cartoony but i dont think the line art is how i want it. Can anyone tell me how to fix that? thanks