Anatomy Practice (3 colors)

[Chaos Tayoko]

Yea I started on this about an hour ago, my first time using low colors. I was practicing anatomy and decided to make this, I am eventually gonna do the entire body.

[Soup]

Looking good.
Ref?
I also suggest a pallete edit.

[Chaos Tayoko]

no ref, i was kinda testing myself to c if i can remember the stuff. Yea i should change the colors.

[commodore]

Nice shape, not so good shading&colours.

[Stwelin]

he looks as though he is puckering his lips.  the sides of your lips (mouth) fall on the same vertical line as the center of your eyes.  you should consider stretching the lips a little farther across his face.  other than that it looks pretty solid, but as said before, needs some palette tweaking.