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dont you hate it when..

on: December 22, 2006, 09:39:22 pm
you dont even know what your making?
past:
http://img488.imageshack.us/img488/9383/lolca8.png
http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/5340/lolxi1.png
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crits+comments always appreciated.
« Last Edit: December 23, 2006, 05:25:07 am by Ryumaru »

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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #1 on: December 22, 2006, 09:40:42 pm
Looks good, whatever it is.  Has an edgy modernistic feel to it I can't wait till it is done.

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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #2 on: December 22, 2006, 09:41:38 pm
Like the circuits that look like blood running down the wall. IS it an evangalion?
Modern artists are told that they must create something totally original-or risk being called "derivative".They've been indoctrinated with the concept that bad=good.The effect is always the same: Meaningless primitivism
http://www.artrenewal.org/articles/Philosophy/phi

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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #3 on: December 22, 2006, 09:56:23 pm
pingpong: heh, i cant wait to see it done too :P

sharprm: http://images.google.com/images?hl=en&q=evangelion
hmm, definitely not an evangalion.
never really been a fan of mech anime, when i was into anime.

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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #4 on: December 22, 2006, 10:16:05 pm
cool stuff..
what bothers me though is with its back muscles near the armpits.. there's a large gap there.. The back muscles should probably be wider to fill more of the gap near the armpits considering how muscular it is. The whole ribcage could be larger actually as well, but it could be due to the alien-ish style.. but yeah, anyways.. it looks like he has no shoulderblades basically..

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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #5 on: December 22, 2006, 11:06:37 pm
Hahaha.. it really pains me to say this, seriously.. but it does look like an EVA.

Fuck the similarity, though, just roll with it. It looks nice so far. Do the legs.  :y:
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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #6 on: December 23, 2006, 12:34:13 am
Very nice job, Ryumaru. The darkest shade after the black however kind of clashes with the other colours. Aside from that, I really want to see you finish this one. :)

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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #7 on: December 23, 2006, 01:41:06 am
kon: thanks, ive always had trouble with that.
akzidenz: should i put a pyramid on its head so it doesnt look like one?
ryudo: i like that color D:
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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #8 on: December 23, 2006, 02:40:02 am
Nice work ryu.. now finish please :D

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Re: dont you hate it when..

Reply #9 on: December 23, 2006, 03:09:04 am
If you don't want to change that color, could you change the black to a darkish red-orange and the color on the other side to a bit more of a purple? Do it for the sake of the ramp, pity the poor ramp.

I really like the pseudohuman musculature you've got going in a lot of your pieces and this is no exception, but I think it could do with a larger head or maybe even a totally inhuman one.