-= THE COMET OF DESTINY =- - 200x188 - 12 colors !! [FINISHED]

[Senad]

Well thank you very much, and to you up there hehe, I can spell right if I want to, but I spell right only if I write letters or if I'm in school you know, I'm 17 if you wonder and english is my 3rd language. It happends pretty often that I write like that just becouse I'm in a hury or if I dont think about it. I am sorry if it bothers you, I will try to spell right from now and on, but I can not garantee anything .

Thank you very much for that suggestion, now after reading your message and saw your picture, that part started to bother me too.. I will try my best to fix it and try to remove couple more colors maybe

Thank you, BJ I'll be posting comming updates

[Senad]

al right... now iv been pixeling pretty much since no more school, I got a break

So here it is, new update.. I tried to fix everything u said and even dithered and added some AA a bit more where I thought it looks sharp and wierd..

Now 12 colors !


So, what do you think now?

[David]

I think the composition is really lacking. The main focus of the piece is cut-off and tucked in a corner.

[Senad]

Well my acctually idea wasnt to have it 200x188.. but it is for one contest and I had to have it like that.. also If i wanted to make a comet that u can see the top and the smoke behind it.. I had to do like this.. I know its lacking.. bad position.. but what do you think about the piece, any suggestions? thats a good thing u said there, but as i said, i can not do anything about it..

[Larwick]

I suggest shifting the image ten pixels to the right. Nothing in that area really adds to the piece as much as fixing the composition slightly will.

[Senad]

All right thanx Ill do what I can

[Feron]

It looks really rough and scrappy.
check out these 2 pieces below, and how smooth they are (the second isnt complete but it shows you how to go about creating smoke and you can see how it would look).  smooth is a fluid and therefore flows.  the palette and composition is ok - you just need to refine your pixel placement a lot more.


By henk nieborg.


im 90% sure this is by st0ven.  i cant remember.

i think using more black would add a lot more depth to this piece also.

[Senad]

well i dont know if i can do more on this one.. i got 2 days left.. but Im sure ill be practicing on that u just told me ! thanx very much

awesome pixels !

[Senad]

I think its finished now.. 12 colors